Kushiel's Dart

[azurelunatic]

So far, there are some conceits of the narrative style that displease me. For example, the "If only I had ... but alas" convention. I don't like it in general, and it's still annoying in a good yarn, but it fits the voice. Alas.

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[othercat.livejournal.com]

I've said it before, and I'll say it again, the narrative style drove me *bonkers* :>

[azurelunatic]

I see what you mean. It just makes you want to NOT smack the little whiny bitch!