Azure Jane Lunatic (Azz) 🌺 (
azurelunatic) wrote2003-08-09 12:33 pm
Books
Finished Narcissus in Chains, Laurell K. Hamilton.
Rather a lot of sex, and a little low on plot. Could have been easily half the length and smoother without so much sex.
reichiere says that the next one is... worse.
Not that smut is a bad thing, but Anita deserves better than to become PWP.
Am reading Kushiel's Chosen. Yay!
Unfortunately, there's a yolk for yoke, and gate for gait. Those are the errors I've spotted so far.
But in a rather large and overall literate book, that's a small price to pay. It's so very much better than alright.
Rather a lot of sex, and a little low on plot. Could have been easily half the length and smoother without so much sex.
Not that smut is a bad thing, but Anita deserves better than to become PWP.
Am reading Kushiel's Chosen. Yay!
Unfortunately, there's a yolk for yoke, and gate for gait. Those are the errors I've spotted so far.
But in a rather large and overall literate book, that's a small price to pay. It's so very much better than alright.
