Puns review for azurelunatic, I2

[azurelunatic]

http://azurelunatic.livejournal.com/6235355.html
(journaling sites)
This is a nearly purely visual effect, relying on the similarity of the Dreamwidth swirly-d to a closed fist with the thumb extended. This is a refinement of folk's original quip, which involved removing the 'd' for humorous effect. I could have taken more time to refine the image and perhaps changed the angle of the wrist for a smoother and less pastede-on-yey effect.

http://azurelunatic.livejournal.com/6235055.html
(cooking)
I am proud of the classical allusion. I don't believe that could have been improved upon much. However, the presentation could have been improved to better showcase the art.

http://azurelunatic.livejournal.com/6098582.html
(sports)
This is simple and original. I chose to make a tradeoff between elaborate setup and simple punch, although this could also be presented with a long introduction. For reference, I included a FAQ with one definition, however, for best effect I should have also defined the Zero Wing reference either indirectly or directly (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Zero_Wing or http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/All_your_base_are_belong_to_us) The included FAQ was floating.

http://azurelunatic.livejournal.com/6055447.html
(top-level domains)
This is also original work, playing off current events. This required an elaborate setup, although even more setup/background is required when the audience is less familiar with domains and how they work. I would not recommend using this one on a non-technical audience as a general rule.

http://azurelunatic.livejournal.com/6040028.html
(cooking)
This required extensive preparation and research, but the results were well-done if saucy.

http://azurelunatic.livejournal.com/6040028.html
(media)
Also original, this was delivered with great animation.

http://azurelunatic.livejournal.com/6006904.html
(geology)
Also original. I should have run faster.

http://azurelunatic.livejournal.com/5998773.html & http://azurelunatic.livejournal.com/5998434.html
(wordplay)
This is a return to basics. Pedestrian and not inspired.

http://azurelunatic.livejournal.com/5996536.html
(journaling sites)
This started as wordplay with an associated image, but the user re-greened to let us know that it was incredibly accurate.

http://azurelunatic.livejournal.com/5990288.html
(crime) (religion)
This was a multiple-issue request, with the same user re-greening with more issues. Delicate timing was necessary for the first; the second was topical to a current holiday.

Comments

[azurelunatic]

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[pauamma]

Hi, I'm claiming this for review, and I want to check something with you before I get started:

http://azurelunatic.livejournal.com/6040028.html
(cooking)
This required extensive preparation and research, but the results were well-done if saucy.

http://azurelunatic.livejournal.com/6040028.html
(media)
Also original, this was delivered with great animation.

These point to the same request. Is one a pasto?