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Azure Jane Lunatic (Azz) 🌺 ([personal profile] azurelunatic) wrote2002-12-08 10:00 am

To do, novelwise

Remove Paul Rowan from Xgn, or establish his character firmly. (Am wondering should he be the Scotty clone in the Captain's universe. Would like the Green Alert chapter back in, complete with New Year party.)
Establish Rose as far more cavalier towards Zach until the moments of truth.
Establish Zach as far more serious about Rose, and less, ...um, well. Kimmiebeth knows from whence Zach springs. And Zach's origins are not good, and unromantic to boot.